write your own poem

1st stanza

A mysterious boat appeared in deep fog and the weather sog  for long,

pong the game ended at death won the game

stanza 2

The silent ocean they spoke to

only break the silence I the sea

quoth he  Death’s friend is angry for not she did not win!

3rd stanza

 the ancient mariner shot the albatross

down nor he did not feel sad but his crew

felt something in there heart

although they did feed the albatross

4th stanza 

Nor the ancient mariner did not care

although he thought the albatross

wind but now he disbelieves his thievery

nor the crew hated him

5th stanza

The albatross died and the ancient mariner

got cursed by the crew they put the dead albatross

the crew did not like the mariner

6th stanza

 death killed the who crew thy fell down in a swound.

the ancient mariner was standing he could not talk

he was thirsty nor he tried to pray but he could not

7th stanza

Death left with his friend but still the ancient

 mariner still could not pray he went near the

ocean and saw a horrible  fish but he saw the

beauty in it then now he could pray

 8th stanza 

his crew cam back to life like the were

zombies although they did not

walk normal his cason came back to life and helped him move the boat

it was moving with no wind

analyse a stanza

1st stanza: And i had done a hellish thing,

And i would work ’em woe,

for all averred,I had killed the bird,

That made the breeze to blow,

Ah wretch!, said they, the bird to slay,

That made the breeze to blow:

what there trying to say is that the mariner has killed the albatross and he was crawl to do that which the albatross brag the wind and the breeze the rhythm is them saying breeze and blow also the writing and spelling tells us its an old poem because it has old language in it.the word hellish is same as saying bad and stupid.

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The souls did from their bodies fly,–

They fled to bliss or woe!And every soul,

it passed me by, Like the whizz of my CROSS-BOW!

this is mean that the mariner crew had died and he could see there souls flying up in the air like he was imaging

and also it mean that deaths friend has won and she’s there should but the mariner soul did not go up

with them still he just saw them going up by them self although he was in the boat with his crew

this is when deaths friend takes there souls

this when they got hit on the iceberg

Wolf brother

My book is called wolf brother, it’s about a little kid called T in the stone age he only has a father they’re not in a pack because Torak has a secret power and he don’t know about it his father kept it from telling him. But then a devil bear killed him father Torak  couldn’t stay with him so he set off by himself with no supplies. He finds a wolf with his family he was planning to eat it but the baby wolf dad and mum was drowning eventually they died leaving the baby wolf on his own Torak and the wolf were like the same. both with no family, no food also were all alone before Torak’s dad died he told him to go to a magical mountain called the mountain of the world spirt.